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[ICY-468] Update 2000-01-01-secnumcloud.md: EN improvement + ID control step addition #2895
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…ol step addition Update 2000-01-01-secnumcloud.md: EN improvement + ID control step addition Was discussed with support team in November 2024 to make external process clearer.
3. An answer will be provided under 7 business days | ||
3. An first answer will be provided under 7 business days | ||
4. _First-time domain or project registration only:_ an identity verification will be conducted. | ||
You may need to prepare the ID card or passport (or use official tools like [France Identité](https://france-identite.gouv.fr/justificatif/)) of the new app owner. |
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Too vague. Don't use terms like "you may" or too many "ors". The procedure has to be very clear.
@@ -32,7 +37,7 @@ A standard user cannot access `osc-secnum-fr1`, your user has to be allow-listed | |||
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- The user must have a legitimate reason to access the `osc-secnum-fr1` region: | |||
create or collaborate an application hosted in this region | |||
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email | |||
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification) |
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Be more explicit with "domain verification"
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- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification) | |
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification ensures that your organization owns or controls the specified domain, allowing you to authenticate and secure email communications sent on behalf of your company) |
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3. An answer will be provided under 7 business days | ||
3. An first answer will be provided under 7 business days | ||
4. _First-time domain or project registration only:_ an identity verification will be conducted. | ||
You may need to prepare the ID card or passport (or use official tools like [France Identité](https://france-identite.gouv.fr/justificatif/)) of the new app owner. |
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You may need to prepare the ID card or passport (or use official tools like [France Identité](https://france-identite.gouv.fr/justificatif/)) of the new app owner. | |
Prepare the Identity Document of the new app owner or use official tools like [France Identité](https://france-identite.gouv.fr/justificatif/)). |
@@ -32,7 +37,7 @@ A standard user cannot access `osc-secnum-fr1`, your user has to be allow-listed | |||
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- The user must have a legitimate reason to access the `osc-secnum-fr1` region: | |||
create or collaborate an application hosted in this region | |||
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email | |||
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification) |
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- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification) | |
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification ensures that your organization owns or controls the specified domain, allowing you to authenticate and secure email communications sent on behalf of your company) |
@@ -32,7 +37,7 @@ A standard user cannot access `osc-secnum-fr1`, your user has to be allow-listed | |||
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- The user must have a legitimate reason to access the `osc-secnum-fr1` region: | |||
create or collaborate an application hosted in this region | |||
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email | |||
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification) |
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Update 2000-01-01-secnumcloud.md: EN improvement + ID control step addition Was discussed with support team in November 2024 to make external process clearer.