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[ICY-468] Update 2000-01-01-secnumcloud.md: EN improvement + ID control step addition #2895

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Update 2000-01-01-secnumcloud.md: EN improvement + ID control step addition Was discussed with support team in November 2024 to make external process clearer.

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Update 2000-01-01-secnumcloud.md: EN improvement + ID control step addition
Was discussed with support team in November 2024 to make external process clearer.
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3. An answer will be provided under 7 business days
3. An first answer will be provided under 7 business days
4. _First-time domain or project registration only:_ an identity verification will be conducted.
You may need to prepare the ID card or passport (or use official tools like [France Identité](https://france-identite.gouv.fr/justificatif/)) of the new app owner.
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Too vague. Don't use terms like "you may" or too many "ors". The procedure has to be very clear.

@@ -32,7 +37,7 @@ A standard user cannot access `osc-secnum-fr1`, your user has to be allow-listed

- The user must have a legitimate reason to access the `osc-secnum-fr1` region:
create or collaborate an application hosted in this region
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification)
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Be more explicit with "domain verification"

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- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification)
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification ensures that your organization owns or controls the specified domain, allowing you to authenticate and secure email communications sent on behalf of your company)

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3. An answer will be provided under 7 business days
3. An first answer will be provided under 7 business days
4. _First-time domain or project registration only:_ an identity verification will be conducted.
You may need to prepare the ID card or passport (or use official tools like [France Identité](https://france-identite.gouv.fr/justificatif/)) of the new app owner.
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You may need to prepare the ID card or passport (or use official tools like [France Identité](https://france-identite.gouv.fr/justificatif/)) of the new app owner.
Prepare the Identity Document of the new app owner or use official tools like [France Identité](https://france-identite.gouv.fr/justificatif/)).

@@ -32,7 +37,7 @@ A standard user cannot access `osc-secnum-fr1`, your user has to be allow-listed

- The user must have a legitimate reason to access the `osc-secnum-fr1` region:
create or collaborate an application hosted in this region
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification)
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- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification)
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification ensures that your organization owns or controls the specified domain, allowing you to authenticate and secure email communications sent on behalf of your company)

@@ -32,7 +37,7 @@ A standard user cannot access `osc-secnum-fr1`, your user has to be allow-listed

- The user must have a legitimate reason to access the `osc-secnum-fr1` region:
create or collaborate an application hosted in this region
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email
- The user must act as an employee of a company, using his/her company email (domain verification)
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