Managed services definition added #204
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ShivamTyagi12345
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CathPag,
DanielJonesEB,
IdealUsrname and
JasonMorgan
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Thanks, @ShivamTyagi12345. Please give us a little time to review and get back with feedback. |
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Sure thing @CathPag :) |
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| ## Managed sevices | ||
| ### What it is | ||
| A complete safety net to your technical environment. It is the trust that you can have in a team to look after, both proactively and reactively, an ever-changing database environment. Above all, it is the knowledge that you have a team of experts to cover all areas of issues! |
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A little too marketing-y. This is a really good start but we'll need to be more succinct in our definition and a little less effusive with our praise of the tech. Ex:
What is a managed service? it is a service provided by a third party that can be consumed by application developers or operations teams. Managed services range from data storage, to monitoring, to analytics, or even text messages.
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@JasonMorgan I would gladly do the changes you are asking for. The next version would be comprising of
- compressed paragraphs, consistent with current glossary styling
- Definitions that doesn't sound like a Sales-representative(Hopefully)
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| Listed below are the main challenges Managed Services addresses and resolves. |
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Great writing but not consistent with the current glossary style.
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| ### How it helps | ||
| 1.Managed services can make sure your firewalls are configured properly, administer identity and access management solutions, and verify the security of your data in the cloud. |
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We don't want bullet points or numbering. This needs to be one or two paragraphs and ideally around 3-4 sentences.
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Hey @JasonMorgan, I have tried and compressed the paras. In this attempt, I tried to be succinct with my definitions. Please suggest any changes that you find necessary. |
Hy @CathPag .Thanks for reviewing,Was the definition not complete, or, it didn't meet a pre-set threshold as set by other definitions? However, I would like to improve in my next PR. Can I get started on this issue now. I would really appreciate it if you mention the specific location where the entry needs to be made this time. |
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@ShivamTyagi12345, sure. Have a look at the new PR. |
Here is a definition of Managed services with a detailed focus on the major IT problems it focuses on and how it helps in solving those problems.
I would be happy to incorporate any further amends, once reviewed .